Ladies what would you think of this letter/gesture?

AWE! that is so cute :) but the part that says : which if you are fortunate enough; you may come across four or five times in a lifetime.. I wouldn't put that because it makes it seem not as special i would replace it with : which if you are fortunate enough: you may come across one inj a lifetime. But other than that it is so nice! definately give it to her!!!! :D